2016-03-30 (W) Charged: DesertIrish

Dawson started with his tantrum about Jason trading away The Flying Machine. Dawson went for a run and slowed to have a meditation session of sorts. The way he got to the bottom of the problem was to pose questions then answer them. Most of the questions revolved around him being jealous of Numbers. This came around to show that he had no reason to be jealous and every reason to be grateful. Back from his jog he began reading Jason’s explanation which appeared to be written like part of a larger story.

During the story Dawson paraphrases what he read in Jason’s story rather than include the whole story.

The story is about Jason’s experiences after he left the dock with The Flying Machine. He went to Europe and visited tourist areas in a highly illogical manner but it didn’t matter since he was able to travel so quickly. This part was not given much focus since it didn’t relate to the part about The Flying Machine but was able to remind the reader that Jason can speak different languages and sense bodies in all directions.

Dawson picks up when Jason travels to Tibet while tracking another artifact, which Jason already admitted he gained for The Flying Machine. In Tibet Jason travels up a mountain looking for clues but doesn’t find anything until he uses the tracking feature unlocked by Head. After that he finds two monks identified by The Flying Machine and comes back to talk to them.

The monks put him to work doing chores suited to a tall person and in the evening they take him on a walk in the mountains.

Charged

To do:
  • Show how Shana knew Motor and Heather were a new couple.
  • Reduce overuse of the word "power."
  • Create a cheat sheet for the characters and their abilities.
  • Describe a reality TV show which demonstrates the powers of contestants.
  • Describe a trial where a Charged person sues for the right to have a second identity but the case turns against him into a vilification of vigilanteism.
Total word count: 20 424 + 60 228 + 83 897 = 164 549 words

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2016-03-21 (M)

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