2016-04-14 (Th) Charged: DesertIrish

Recording for chapter four was finished. Links to all four audio chapters were posted below. The text is steadily improving too. Reading critically in order to create an audio book reading has proven more valuable than simply reading or even reading aloud. Having to smoothly form each word as part of a sentence to be spoken forces corrections which might have slipped through during a silent reading or even a quick out-loud reading.

Chapter four was short and focused on the interaction with Dawson and Billy. This centered on dialogue between the two men. Another character had several lines of dialogue but a thick accent which was attempted during the reading. Fortunately the character cast was very small so hopefully they are easy to tell apart for anyone listening.


To do:
  • Show how Shana knew Motor and Heather were a new couple.
  • Reduce overuse of the word "power."
  • Describe a reality TV show which demonstrates the powers of contestants.
  • Describe a trial where a Charged person sues for the right to have a second identity but the case turns against him into a vilification of vigilantism
Total word count: 27 240 + 60 228 + 83 897 = 171 365 words

The rest of the posts for this project have been arranged by date.

First time here?

Completed projects from year 1.
Completed projects from year 2

This disclaimer must be intact and whole. This disclaimer must be included if a project is distributed.

All information in this blog, or linked by this blog, are not to be taken as advice or solicitation. Anyone attempting to replicate, in whole or in part, is responsible for the outcome and procedure. Any loss of functionality, money, property or similar, is the responsibility of those involved in the replication.

All digital communication regarding the email address 24hourengineer@gmail.com becomes the intellectual property of Brian McEvoy. Any information contained within these messages may be distributed or retained at the discretion of Brian McEvoy. Any email sent to this address, or any email account owned by Brian McEvoy, cannot be used to claim property or assets.

Comments to the blog may be utilized or erased at the discretion of the owner. No one posting may claim claim property or assets based on their post.

This blog, including pictures and text, is copyright to Brian McEvoy.

2016-04-07 (Th)