Most of the editing has been a matter of adding descriptions and revising dialogue to sound natural. A couple of times, someone said something out of character, but those were easy to spot. In this round of editing, we modified a scene so instead of Ness being critical of Jerry, they talked with Marigold about human nature. The exchange was always a way to demonstrate that Marigold isn't well-versed in human behavior, but this way, Ness isn't so abrasive.
The rest of the posts for this project have been arranged by date.
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