2021-03-24 (W) Gravy Shock

Most of the day's editing centered around rewriting awkward passages. I don't use a grammar checker beyond what Google implements in their Docs environment, but this is all dialogue. The first big edit was about artificial gravity plates and how they've evolved. The first rendition meandered, but I tightened it up a bit. I also cut a scene where Jerry describes his sister because it was way off-topic. Jerry's conversations bunny-trail a lot, but I needed to condense it for the comic. For now, I'll leave panel descriptions blank and write them myself.
Editing and revising

Interactive 3D houseboat model.

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